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LOVE LOVE
what is love?? WILL I FIND IT??
does it taste good? IS IT A FEELING????
can you even eat it??? I AM CLUELESS!!!!!!!
love is a challenge for me!Ive never felt it!!!!
heart heart heart heart heart heart !!!
Im to dark to notice....it feels soo empty....
I want love i want to feel it soooo badly!
heart heart heart heart heart !!
love,love,love,LOVE!LOVE!LOVE!
ILL BE LOVED ILL BE LOVED!!!
LOVE IS WEIRD AND GUSH
-Y BUT IM CURIOUS!!!!!!
WILL I FIND IT???!!!!
HMMMMMMMMMM
LOVE,LOVE,!!!!
WHATS heart
heart !!!!!
redface
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- by Gothicgirlhaha |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/16/2009 |
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- Title: what is love?
- Artist: Gothicgirlhaha
- Description: for all the emos and goths out there!!!+punks
- Date: 10/16/2009
- Tags: love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- dfsgfbsgbdfgsfgergergerg - 10/10/2012
- Although I do appreciate the effort you did put into this, I believe you could have elaborate much better with the word choice. I think it would be awfully cute if you put it as a poem (with less hearts of course c smile with rhyming and the such. Other than that, keep writing and I'm sure you'll come up with something beautiful.
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- Slinkenhofer - 07/04/2012
- I saw the mess of bouncing pink and didn't even look back...
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- crow gf - 06/28/2012
- I like this poem a lot. I think it is written strangely, but I understand it. It might have been better if you did without the capitalization. smile just a few tips and my opinion. smile
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- telepathicnoob - 06/20/2012
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you guys should stop hating on this chick so she posted a crappy poem so what? just because it might have offended you somehow does not mean you should offend her, to me she just sounds like the common goofy, nice, super bored girl you don't have to be so mean. (no offense but this poem was not the best, but you might make a good fictional writer!)
oh and haters, stop being such jerks it's really messed up she might need to hear some of it but really? - Report As Spam
- poopsuu - 02/11/2012
- I'm sorry, but to be blunt, this is horrible.
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- FoundInSong - 10/06/2011
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This has this sort of strange childishness emanating from it, and it's not particularly a good childishness.
The emotions are understandable, but all the capitals and exclamation points, not to mention the emotes, are just gauche. There must be a better way to put this together. It's a travesty. And who writes "HA" at the end of a poem? Really? That's like making fun of yourself and the emotions you just tried to share.
It really didn't work. - Report As Spam
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