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I spent the day with your family.
It was alot of fun though I must admit,
I've never met you, not even once,
it would have been more fun if you were there.
I walked back in to get my coat.
Your cousin smiled and said goodbuy.
I grabbed my coat and walked out.
The wierd part was you were in the kitchen infront of the kitchen sink with the water running.
I assume that befor that you were in the shower,
because when you came out of the bathroom after work,
your hair was wet and you were wearing new clothes.
There were no dishes in the sink iether.
I sat at the computer with your cousin,
before you got there while your mom was doing them.
So I know that there were none in there.
You stood infront of the kitchen sink with the water running.
Your door was open and screen was closed,
So I knew that the water was not running before I walked in.
I guess I'll never know why but it will always haunt me.
But it never hurts to ask.
Why was the water running when I came in to grab my coat,
and i couldnot hear it before I opened the door?
Theres another question I always wanted to ask.
Why do you never let me see your face?
Mabey some how the two are conneceted.
In some wierd way they just might be.
The thing that bugs me the most is,
you were in the kitchen infront of the kitchen sink with the water running.
- by Purple_Pearl_Girl |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/01/2010 |
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- Title: 2 good questions
- Artist: Purple_Pearl_Girl
- Description: =) I know that its kinda mixed up but thats why I wrote it. Its a mixed up free verse. I would like everyone who reads it to leave a comment please. I would like to make it a little better and would love it if you could help me out. Its 2 good questions that I've always been curious about. Yes, its a bit long but I would like your opinion on it. Thank You! =)
- Date: 01/01/2010
- Tags: good questions water running sink
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Comments (3 Comments)
- thomulus - 02/01/2010
- Finally I didn't get it, you didn't mention the face part till the end? I think your suggesting he burnt his face severely and is hiding it because he's ashamed or embarrassed
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- thomulus - 02/01/2010
- The length of it is good, you told a story, bad spelling though razz , I understand it was freelance but the poetry is always better with proper spelling so spell check next time, at the end it got a bit repetitive with the water running in front of the kitchen sink, I kind of liked because it gave the poem a bit of eeriness.
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- Purple_Pearl_Girl - 01/30/2010
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Don't be affriad to comment. I would really like them to know how to make my poems better. How can I if you don't leave me comments?
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