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Black skies form and Hell rise.
Demons kill with bloodthirsty cries.
Fearful for their deaths, people
Run amok in the chaos.
Everywhere I look, families
Friends, civilians are slayed.
Not much longer though will this stay.
Huddled in a corner, my
Friends and I weep for our loss.
Seeing such turmoil, my heart
I will not cross,
My life I can no longer pretend.
Looking in the eyes of those
I care for more than anything,
Words of peace and hope I give,
Telling how the fairy tales read
Are not fully lies
And how most heros do die.
But by doing so, give determination
To those who survive.
With that story, I wish they'd
Understand, what is about
To be done.
Before another word is said,
A barrier I have made.
Screams and cries is
All that I can hear, for me to stay.
"PLEASE don't leave! We need
You here, not only for our safety
But yours too!!."
Stopped in my tracks at the door,
Taking out my sword,
"From here on, those demons will
Go no further.
For your sakes, I will not fail!"
And out into the frey I leave.
- by Deadlylight6 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/19/2010 |
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- Artist: Deadlylight6
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This is part one of a two, maybe three, set epic. i dont have a title but if anyone thinks of one, id love to hear it!
its about someone odd who comes into a small town to tell everyone that they are in danger, but no one listens. after much chaos and death, a hero was forced to raise.
as this poem is now, u can think either possibilty that the hero will live or die. BUT in the end i will most likely choose. PLZ leave comments on how to improve, much gratitude. - Date: 01/19/2010
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Comments (1 Comments)
- kabraxes - 01/22/2010
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I'm awful at critiquing so I'm just gonna leave it at that I really enjoyed the poem. as for a title suggestion, what about: The Unheard Warning.
Great job. Keep writing. - Report As Spam