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Is this really what fate meant for me?
Is this how she wrote it?
I look back at my life and wonder
Did her hand cramp up when she wrote about him leaving me?
When she reread it did she even care that it hurt?
Did she think about earsing it?
But she didn'y really care it seems.
So i walk through my life,it's the same everyday;fake a smile here,fake a laugh there.It feels like a play.
Pretend it doesn't matter.
Wish it didn't matter.
But it Does.
- by blackcloud711 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/18/2010 |
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- Title: Is this really it?
- Artist: blackcloud711
- Description: please rate and comment
- Date: 02/18/2010
- Tags: really
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Comments (3 Comments)
- blackcloud711 - 04/13/2010
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which line lost u?
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- InspiredLover - 02/21/2010
- Very expressive.
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- Nooova - 02/18/2010
- Interesting. Very interesting. Lots of emotion in it. You can feel it. The words convey everything. Good poem. I was sort of lost at one of the lines, but other than that, it's a good poem.
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