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Uninvited yet passing by
a young girl catches your eye
You see her shimmer
her eyes glimmer
and her smile shine
she sips some wine
she smiles at you
you think its your cue
you approach her
and woo her
you dance as her gown
sways around and around
but its time to leave
you grab her sleeve
and try with your might
but she kisses you good night
You watch her disappear
her words linger in your ear
as this begins your quest
for The Mystery Guest
- Title: The Mystery Guest
- Artist: linymae
- Description: This is a poem I submitted with my avatar for the avatar arena. So many people said they liked my poem that I submitted it here too. :] Enjoy.
- Date: 02/21/2010
- Tags: mystery guest arena avatar
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Comments (2 Comments)
- linymae - 02/21/2010
- Thank you so much!
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- xperfect circlex - 02/21/2010
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good job!!! :]
i really enjoyed this one
especially the "lingure in your ear"
it just felt good to roll off my tongue.
5/5 :] - Report As Spam