baby,i will always be here

• Artist: DisruptedDesire
• Description:
  
• Date: 02/21/2010
• Tags: babyi will always here

Baby, I will always be here, all the time
Because forever I hope you will be mine
No matter how far away or your trials
I will be here to make you smile

Never will I leave, hurt, or betray you
I love you too, too much
Can't you see that we were meant to be
For if it's Gods will you will be my
husband and I will be your wife.

I will always be here for you to make you smile
I love you, Baby, and I know that you love me, too
I know everything that you are going threw and
I will be here for you lending a helping hand
for only you.

I never knew that I would meet
my Love that has been so TRUE
Kendrick, Baby, I really and truly love you!
Baby, I will be here every step of the way
Never leaving your side
Baby, I will always be here and am never
letting go! heart

Comments

[nbetweener]

If you are going to write, then learn to use the tools. Spelling and knowing which word to/too/two use are important.
Try to keep within your meter a little better. your last couplet failed to rhyme at all. While it is fine as a personalized addition for your beau (I've done the same on poems for my wife) it shouldn't be a part of the poem. The lack of rhyme distracts.