Desperation

• Artist: inkheart19
• Description: it's about the pain of losing someone. plus im bored so why not? please tell me wat you think about it.
• Date: 02/23/2010
• Tags: desperation love saddness

You're there,Im here
I reach for you but you don't reach back
my heart cries for you
my eyes swell with tears
I can't reach and grasp your hand
you left me to cry alone
how could you?
why would you?
thanks to I'm gone now
It's you're time to cry

Comments

[inkheart19]

thanks! I kno i need some work but i just thought y not try poetry?

[Denna21_free]

its sad. but the last 2 lines need some work. otherwise i like it.