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You whatch the sand dance in the wind,
and see bodies of those who commited sins.
Your mind screams to take off and run,
but you see a man, with a gun.
You freeze in place, the knife in your hand,
while everything in your head dances like a band.
He draws, closer and nearer,
blood dripping, from the tip of his finger.
You back away, closer to the walls
while the man stops, his eyes like balls
but, whats that sound in the distance, a harp?
The man looks behind him, nows your chance!
You charge at him, with the knife in your hand.
You stab it through,
his screams, like a tune
and he falls on the ground
with no more sound.
You let out a cheer
but look up to hear
the angel above,
her wings like doves.
You reach out to her
but alas, she disappears.
Your heart aches for her love
and to feel those wings, like those of a doves.
She appears again,
but her wings, their red!
In vain you yell and scream "Stop!"
The walls, their spinning, like a top!
And soon, you fall into a dream
a dream, of seret melodies,
and yes, for you my freind
this is truely, the end.
- by Xx_T3CHN0_FR3AK_xX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/24/2010 |
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- Title: Life and Death
- Artist: Xx_T3CHN0_FR3AK_xX
- Description: A little story I wrote.I`m a beginner at writing poems.
- Date: 03/24/2010
- Tags: life death
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Comments (3 Comments)
- mooselover25 - 06/08/2010
- i agree with cagebird, it is a little akward sounding because you are forcing it to ryhme, and remember just cause its a poem doesnt mean it has to rhyme, plenty of mine dont! good luck, and remember, just enjoy yourself, thats what its all about!
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- Xx_T3CHN0_FR3AK_xX - 03/30/2010
- okay thanks im kinda new at writing poetry
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- RaygunnerDown - 03/28/2010
- you're trying too hard to rhyme and it sounds awkward. try writing w/o a rhyme scheme orspecific pattern, otherwise, i liked it.
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