My poem #1 =w=

• Artist: Crimson Rebel Ghost
• Description: Idk i write sometimes and i dont rlly got any good titles for any of my stuff. i dont care bout how many stars i get, i just felt like i might as well share it with you ppl o3o
  
  enjoy....or not XD
• Date: 03/26/2010
• Tags: poem

If love was still there,
And the world still cared.
People wouldn't be dieing.
Everyday in the streets of Iraq,Iran,Baghdad, and Afghanistan.
Fatherless children wouldn't be crying.
Food once always on the table would still be there.
Less terrorist bombs
putting the smoke of burning bodies in the air.
But in the world today
There's hate everywhere.
Blood is the new drug and humans are the addict.

Comments

[l-Femi-l]

I really like how it rhymes but you didn't just throw words in there to make it rhyme. It's really, really an awesome poem. I rate a 5. =w=

[Crimson Rebel Ghost]

TwT thank you thank you! i know im like the best that there has EVER been on gaia but ty anyway! *blows kisses to crowds of adoring fans*



XDDD lmao just playin ppl i know im not da best....just had to do that xD

[I Birdy I]

THAT!.IS!AMAZING!!!!..WootWoot..I give chu a 5!