I've lost you

• Artist: XxNinjaDinosawrxX
• Description: A girl had lost her only love because of her obsession of pain. The guy was worried but he made her obsession worse by leaving her.
  Still not sure if I'm any good or not. Please still go a little easy on me I'm still a beginner at the arena :/ *Please comment to help me get better if you think I need to get better (:
• Date: 04/02/2010
• Tags: lost

I need your help getting over this.
These scars upon my wrists.

I’d keep it up for you.
Only if you wanted me to.

I can’t hide this pain.
Is it that plain?

Trying to over come it.
But the flame is still lit.

Am I taking the wrong path?
You say we wont last.

All this blood.
Begins to rush.

Skin goes cold
It was my time to go
…

Comments

[Siren of the Stars]

nicely done a little emo and its sad because he cant take it anymore so she finally dies. sad.