Giving Up

• Artist: Tigcat2
• Description: Just kinda wrote it. It was when I thought I did something to a good friend, yet I hadn't. But I only learned that later, so this is what I wrote.
  Side note: I know poems don't usually have so many ellipses and everything, I had them there because I felt like it showed how emotional it was meant to be, and how hard it was for me to write it. So, I know I should take them out, but I'm leaving it in it's original form. (:
  Please comment and rate! <3
• Date: 04/05/2010
• Tags: giving

I stopped him, I started him again.
It's not pretend.
God, I knew we weren't just friends...
Together till the end.
That's just a small amount of what we are,
So far.
We're together forever,
Forever...or never?
Lovers and daters.
Back stabbers and haters.
We last through it all..
Then, comes the fall.
I give up, pulling the trigger, to end this life.
Struggling in my strife.
He falls to his knees,
Begging, please..
Don't let this be true...can't be real.
He no longer feels.
The gun is lifted, load it...pull the trigger.
You see a dark figure.
He falls to the ground, bloody and hurt.
Blood soaks through his shirt.
Goodbye my friend...
This is the end.

Comments

[Tigcat2]

Thanks. (:

[huntress Artimes]

wow kinda brutel stilll very good