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I Know I'm Not Beautiful
I Try To Care
To Care For Everyone
Even Though There Never There
I Try Help As Much As I Can
To Keep People Happy
To Be There Friend
I Would Treat Them As My Own Kin
I'd Protect Them
Love Them
Treat Them
As My Own
I Will Be Just A Click Away
And My Friendships Have Grown
Even Tho I Am Sometimes Not Happy
Because Some days Are Mostly Crappy
I Try To Stay There
For All Of U
And Be Nice
Instead Of Having A Heart Of Cold Ice.
So Remember All My Friends
Even Tho u May Not Like Me
i Will Be Ur Friend For Now And For Then All The Way Till The End.
- by TheGraceOfFlutterbies |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/12/2010 |
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- Title: Me
- Artist: TheGraceOfFlutterbies
- Description: I Just Wrote This So I Am Sorry If It Is Not Well Written.
- Date: 04/12/2010
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Comments (7 Comments)
- TheGraceOfFlutterbies - 07/06/2010
- LoL Its Ok I Like That Your Honest. And I Will Do A Little More Work On it. ^^ Thank You.
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- out of controll - 07/06/2010
- ok im going to be honest...it is a good subject and you do a great job...until the end. the second stanza kinda falls apart. ive seen your other work and i know that you can do better...sometimes it is good to leave a poem and come back to it...it helps you see things that you may not have seen before. anyways its not crap so ill give you a 4/5. try to clean it up a little at the end. (oh and dont take my advice if you dont want to, but i will tell you i have experience in this)
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- TheGraceOfFlutterbies - 04/13/2010
- Thank You smile ))
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- Kaiamai-Chan - 04/13/2010
- That is a wonderful poem! I <3 it!
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- TheGraceOfFlutterbies - 04/13/2010
- Thanks Soo Much You Gals smile
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- flexandburden - 04/12/2010
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Hey, bishko is the one who sent me your link ^^.
You write great things. I bet every gal feels the same. You have a way to relate to your readers. Thats an amazing feeling. Good for the gold!!!! 5/5 - Report As Spam
- Bishko - 04/12/2010
- Maid is also a poet, ask her sometime she will prob give tips but she's good so you should ask her for a poem ()._.()
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