Infatuation Of A Lovesick Boy

• Artist: Darius Stormwolf
• Description: This is a poem I wrote when I was 14 for my best friend, with whom I fell in love with. She could never return my feelings though, and I just figured I would do something useful with this poem.
  
  I first submitted this poem into the forum on my other account, Raiden802 but it didn't the exposure I would have liked so it's the arenas this time. Hope people like it :)
• Date: 04/20/2010
• Tags: infatuation

More fair the a summer evening,
more gentle than an ocean breeze.

Sometimes you have me believing,
your an angel,more beautiful than all the seas.

So pure of heart you are,
your smile gleams like a second sun.

Your like a shining star,
that shines like two,not one!

I'd give you my heart if you'd take it,
you'd be my everything.

Your refusal would totally break it,
my soul would no longer sing.

So tell me you'll give me a chance,
to show you how much I care.

And together we'll do the dance,
of those with love to share!

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It's wonderful, Raiden!! I'll give you 5 stars, friend : )