Falling

• Artist: MTM9696
• Description: Okay I'm sorry I suck at poetry haha, but I'd appreciate a rating! i kinda wrote this in like 5 minutes sooo don't hate too much please please <3 xD
• Date: 04/27/2010
• Tags: fallingsnowdeathblah

A frosty snowflake says hello
Amid a raging blizzard out below
I reach for him, crying, as he takes his last breath
And plunders slowly into it's
Lovely, white death

Comments

[Xx_Forgetting Tomorrow_xX]

I loved it smile 5/5

[Angel Bluestockin]

Why would you say that? You don't suck; you're good! I love it!
(Corny is my comments but I can't think of anything else. Sorry!)

[Water Meat Slut]

Haha, it didn't suck c; I rate 5/5 <3