Like Frost in the Moonlight

• Artist: Dolaeruxus
• Description: Here's the second of the three poems that I've written recently! Well-- actually-- there was more than three but I didn't really like the others...so I just chose the three I liked out of the bunch. :D As a last note, these poems are usually made from what I daydream/think/imagine about. Sometimes I get quite interesting fantasies.
• Date: 04/28/2010
• Tags: like frost moonlight

Glass lilies
Suspended on cloud dust and tears
Fragile and delicate
So many rainbows

Chilly lint which flutters
Out the downy heavens above
Alighting on the serene face
Of Gaea

Translucent ribbons of
The serpent’s woven breath
Stalk through the Mother’s
Diamond hair

Formless gold shoots
From an emotionless sphere
Taped to the background of
An equally apathetic sapphire

All this I saw
In your eyes

People thought you were dry ice
Winter personified
But I don’t see the tundra
I see spring

Comments

[Dolaeruxus]

Heh, I actually looked at it a couple days later and I thought that it was rather haiku-like too in a sense. ">> But thank you both for your comments~! ^-^

[escreamas]

lol i hope its a haiku becasue i couldnt find the rythem you have a wounderful imagination 4/5

[seven_Sin_incarnate]

its like a bunch of haikus ******** together.... Which is great because coincidentily i love haikus! lol. really great poem!