My Hatred

• Artist: nikkidawn1997
• Description: ......
• Date: 05/14/2010
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I hate the way you talk to me,
and the way you cut your hair,
I hate the way you get mad at me,
I hate it when you stare,
I hate your friends,
and the way you read my mind,
I hate you so much,
It even makes me rhyme,
I hate it when your always right,
I hate it when you lie,
I hate it when you make me laugh,
even worse when you make me cry,
I hate it when your not around,
and the fact that you didnt call,
But mostly I hate the way I dont hate you,
Not even close,
Not even a little bit,
Not even at all.... emo

Comments

[Night Kunoichi]

I liked it until the emote. Then it just killed the mood for me.

[King of Trash]

hahahahaha I think your hate trailed off there at the end. I liked this poem. it had a morbid comedy. lol. 5/5

[Chamomile Dream]

Very beautiful; my only criticism would be to never, ever, use emotes. It looks very bad and unprofessional. Otherwise, it was lovely.

[Flynnnnnn]

Omfg..
That is soo sad.
But I still love it.
:C