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We talk. . .mouths moving, voices sounding
Until you walk out the door, saying you'll be back
I kept myself busy, and waited your sweet return
Then, I recieved that horrendous smack
On my blood red face, realizing you're gone
Your name now I shout to the world
There is never a response
Just like you left me, my eyes then left to the netherworld
No longer looking at you, but no one
I hope you see, because I can't anymore
I am blind to everything and anything
Laying alone, on the hard cold floor
- by The Tainted Blac Rose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/22/2010 |
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- Title: I sigh as you leave
- Artist: The Tainted Blac Rose
- Description: This poem is about how I sigh as a friend of mine leaves me stranded in the middle of somewhere but also nowhere, I am alone with everything but nothing, please comment, I'd rather have 12 comments then 24 ratings, and tell your friends of this poem *sighs*
- Date: 05/22/2010
- Tags: sigh leave smack desserted alone
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Comments (4 Comments)
- iiVietGirl - 11/20/2010
- sad poem.
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- Nina Morenos - 05/23/2010
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Oh, wow... That sucks when you think someone is there for you, but sometimes could be the first to leave you...
I give this poem a 4/5
I like this poem ^^ - Report As Spam
- Anri Sonohara - 05/22/2010
- I don't judge poetry well, But 5/5
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- Doll Shi - 05/22/2010
- It's very nice. I gave you both a rating and a comment :3
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