Made My Day

• Artist: cre8ive_ovadose
• Description: Just another poem I wrote, I like this one :)
• Date: 05/29/2010
• Tags: love wound blood death monsoon

Mentions of death and self-harm, not as bad as the one I posted yesterday though <3 enjoy smile

MADE MY DAY
Make the pain go away
Make it shrivel and fray
Make my life better than this
Give me eternal bliss

In the form of a knife
Can you take away my life?
Don’t let me live in the dark
Don’t let me fall apart

Hold together the pieces
As my blood count decreases
Give me back my soul
Stitch me til I’m whole

But leave this gaping wound
Blood rains like a monsoon
As you watch me slip away
Just know you made my day

Comments

[FieryDawn]

Very very very good! I don't know what you are going through, if you are going through anything, or if this is all just made up, but I want to say that I lost someone very close to me to suicide, and have...taken your poem to heart...in the past. It fits beautifuly.

[kristy1155]

wow. very strong like you knew how it felt like to cute yourself.wierd.this was really good though

[cre8ive_ovadose]

hit the nail right on the head smile glad you liked it

[EATING_CHICKS]

Good. So the person killed themselves. If not feel free to correct me