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I love you so much and try as I might, I think about you every single day and night.
You mean so much, and things of the such.
I have no quick and heartfilling lines, even though I've tried so many times.
This is where I steal lines from things, just like I was a puppet controlled by strings.
But even if they don't work, they don't cause I can't think of anything that rhymes with work.
At least I can say I tried, so much that I've gotten tongue tied.
Your my everything, my anything, you make my thoughts sing, and I love your name's ring.
It's a weird compliment I know, just go with it and let it flow.
I try and try my best, but after all I need to rest.
Untill the next opprotunity comes, don't be sad waiting cause I ish dumbs.
I put a lot into these and always will, until we're together in teal.
It's the color of bliss or so I've heard, at least it's not completely absurd.
It has a good ring don't you agree, or is it just me?
Hey look a question mark, I feel like the inventor Tony Stark.
He had a love too, but he can have his I claim you.
Sometimes I look at other girls I cannot deny, but don't blame me too much I'm just a guy.
Your still the only one for me, don't add another I want us not three.
Wow this one is long, unlike the great Lolli song.
We should sing sometime, and send each other some random rhyme.
That's all i want, just you and you alone is all I've sought.
Well my skills are vanishing, so for now that's everything.
I love you Mistress, if you ever leave I'm gonna miss this.
So now I say goodbye, but at least this time it's not tonight.
I love you... forever.
- Title: I think about you
- Artist: Thmas45
- Description: A poem (ish) note I wrote to the girl I love. I just went with how I felt and wrote it and wanted to see if anyone thought it was good. I'm ok with criticism so say what you want. (Mistress is in there, yes please don't question that)
- Date: 06/03/2010
- Tags: think about love forever
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Comments (1 Comments)
- kasiey_kindredspirt - 07/28/2010
- OOOOHHHH very nice ^^ every girl should have a guy who can write like this biggrin 5/5
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