marching 23

• Artist: ningaman1h6
• Description: this poem is about 23 people that go to war and come back as a hero but they think they are killer dont deserve this treating form there familys and friends
  this is an a origonal peom
  
  by: Ningaman1h6
• Date: 07/21/2010
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thunder crashing over head
the marching 23
1 by 1 they fall dead
a worrior
a murderer
a saviour
is that what you call us
we are the marching 23
never stopping never resting

A saviour ha how about a cold blooded killer
call us what you want
by the living or the dead
we will never be saviour

The marching 23 never to fall.
we march with pride
we fall with honour and
we live as a killer

Comments

[Nikorasuraito]

cool. straight forward. keep working at it.i think it still has potential