The light and The darkness

• Artist: bloody_black_white_zebra
• Description: This poem is suppose to be aboutwhen darkness takes over the world and we try to find light where happiness is.
• Date: 08/26/2010
• Tags: light darkness

As the sun slowly goes down the light goes with it, I watch the moon rising while its also going because the darkness is coming with it. The light is losing its power, while the darkness is growing stronger. The darkness takes over the world while the light is slowly going out. As we watch the moon our only source of light the goodness in life goes out with the sun. And we grow cold not just on the outside but on the inside too. Our red, beautiful hearts turn into cold, black holes. We lose all of our love and its all turned into hatred. We looked for warmth to heal it all. But we cant find it. The moon and the sun are gone. We have no light, no love, and no goodness. It has all gone away. While we walk through the darkness of the world we finally found light. Light to a better side. Where we can find love again and goodness. Our cold, black hearts have been healed into back to our beautiful, red, loving, beating hearts.

Comments

[WHEN SKIES TURN GREY]

I really like what the idea behind this is. it is beautifully written. the only thing that bother me is comparing light and dark in the same sentence. it makes it a wee redundant. maybe breaking it up into two sentences? other than that i like it :3 4/5