Love is patient love is kind

• Artist: ZeldaxLove
• Description: well its kind of a funny story, i was at mass, and they were preaching about the love is patient love is kind thingy, so i wrote a poem! *silence*......not very funny huh....
• Date: 10/06/2010
• Tags: love patient love kind

Love is patient
Love is kind
Love can't seem to live
Outside my mind
Everyone else
Has left me behind
My heart fell and broke
Because love is blind

Comments

[Storytailor]

Oh! And the only reason I didn't give you a five was because I'm not a rhyming person. Still it's a nice piece.

[Storytailor]

Hah, no not funny, your comment on it's not "funniness"? That was funny.
I loved the poem though. I'm not one much to like the rhymes, but even with them I liked it, maybe because of how you turned a piece of the bible into a poem. That was cool. Yeppers (much like peppers, only tastier) that's it I guess. Liked the poem and all! Bye!