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Love is patient
Love is kind
Love can't seem to live
Outside my mind
Everyone else
Has left me behind
My heart fell and broke
Because love is blind
- by ZeldaxLove |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/06/2010 |
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- Title: Love is patient love is kind
- Artist: ZeldaxLove
- Description: well its kind of a funny story, i was at mass, and they were preaching about the love is patient love is kind thingy, so i wrote a poem! *silence*......not very funny huh....
- Date: 10/06/2010
- Tags: love patient love kind
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Storytailor - 10/13/2010
- Oh! And the only reason I didn't give you a five was because I'm not a rhyming person. Still it's a nice piece.
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- Storytailor - 10/13/2010
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Hah, no not funny, your comment on it's not "funniness"? That was funny.
I loved the poem though. I'm not one much to like the rhymes, but even with them I liked it, maybe because of how you turned a piece of the bible into a poem. That was cool. Yeppers (much like peppers, only tastier) that's it I guess. Liked the poem and all! Bye! - Report As Spam