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The burning desire you try to find
Is sometimes blocked by the delicate mind
Its sure you got the might
But unsure if you could win the fight
Imagining the enemy is there
You can't help to find this hidden fear
It happens so quickly at the speed of light
Like the wandering flame that has been ignite
Its impossible to know what he is going to do
But still unsure who will be the fool
A surging headache when he strikes you in the face
But he receives equal pain at a fair pace
Suddenly the teacher pushes you aside
Now all you need is a alibi
Its vexing when you hear you lose
But sickening when you hear he won
Why the hell do you get treat so?
Like pain taking you on a struggling tow
- by Gemini Witchcraft |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/19/2010 |
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- Title: The Fight
- Artist: Gemini Witchcraft
- Description: Poem I wrote after getting in a fight at school :roll:
- Date: 11/19/2010
- Tags: fight
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Comments (4 Comments)
- action3000 - 12/04/2010
- These viewers say that rhyming makes perrfect you made a deep poem and showed what the other person thought or what you thought so you get a 5.
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- Slinkenhofer - 12/01/2010
- Nice, but I'd say work on your rhythm. If you do that, it'll be perfect 3/5
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- Gemini Witchcraft - 11/20/2010
- agree
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- gxbe - 11/20/2010
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3/5 biggrin
i like the way you write it but i think you can maximize the font to be read ^_^ - Report As Spam