me

• Artist: mirisola-1993
• Description: this was the begining of my poetry life i wrote it when i was 6 years old
• Date: 12/05/2010
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when i open my mouth every word that i say paints a picture of me for others that day if i lie all of the colors are shaded with gray and the light and the life fade away from the day but if the words that i say are true than you can see a bright and beautiful picture of me

Comments

[mirisola-1993]

i kept it that way because when i was 6 i didnt know about stanzas

[Rainbow Bunny of Doom]

I think it's wonderful, especially for a six year old O.O I would say divide it into stanzas, but I think it works this way as part of its charm. Bravo! I wish I could write like that when I was six surprised