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Something lies within me,
A dark and evil force,
I had no idea it was there,
Till nature took its corse,
I was enraged one day,
I thought i would explode,
I hit and damaged the inoccent,
and spoke in a harsher tone,
After wich i went home,
And puzzled if i had gone mad,
i laughed and laughed at the sort,
even if so i wouldn't be sad,
For the maddest of people,
people like me,
can see things,
that others can't see.
We see things that are dark,
Thoes things come from hell,
and we se the ligher sort,
we see them just as well.
So acording to my writing,
of this appon the wall,
mabey the world would be better,
if we were MAD one and all.
- by airsthevampire |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/12/2010 |
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- Title: DEEP WITHIN ME
- Artist: airsthevampire
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Description:
Just a darker one of my poems.
~Enjoy - Date: 12/12/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- 3XRainbowCakesX3 - 12/30/2010
- doesnt seem dark to me....srry
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- brittany bloom - 12/12/2010
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Okay so first I'll point out a few spelling errors since im a**l like that XD im sure some of these are just typos
Corse=course
Thoes=those
se=see
ligher=lighter
acording=according
Mabey=maybe
The poem itself doesn't strike me as dark, but sardonic(which works). The wording could be a little better and I wish it was a little deeper in delving into human nature. Overall it gave me a little laugh smile - Report As Spam