Rap ( Mirrors of society)

• Artist: Elf Queen87
• Description: Its about what happened to me. and how life can change you so much.... it isnt finnished yet.
• Date: 12/23/2010
• Tags: mirrors society

I did my best to try to be a mirror of sosiety,
But we both know the mirrors cracked and every body is in the act,
Fakeing what they can not feel,
Hopeing they can make it real,
Reality is killing me,
I hope that i can make you see,
The troubles that you put me threw,
Do you see what you put me threw?
Thinking but you did not feel,
Every thing that felt so real,
I know you lied about what you said,

Comments

[Kimiko Owl-Rider]

I like this poem. However, either you can't spell, or you just can't be bothered to. Neither of those reasons are very good, so I give you this;
4/5