Pigeons and Doves

• Artist: Robotic Purple
• Description:
• Date: 06/09/2011
• Tags: pigeons doves love

Oh pigeon of Dove
How could you be so oblivious?
You liked him
But love?
He called you a dove…
No, he called you a white pigeon
You are the messenger bird
It’s your only purpose
Nothing more
You wish to be wanted
To be loved
And adored
Nobody likes an ugly grey pigeon
All fluff
No flesh
You eat your seeds
Then you rush home
To scared to look back
To scared to even stop and see were your going
You stupid bird
Fat avian failure
You not going anywhere
Just stop
Just die
Just pull you stupid head from the clouds
Fall from the sky
Stop trying to be more
Its over
You’re dead
Your life is at an end

Comments

[The Preppy Kitty]

I like it; short, simple and your spelling is perfect. I bring up the spelling because the last literary piece I reviewed had cuss words spelled perfectly, but other less complicated words spelled as though she was texting a friend, that is unprofessional and idiotic, she had more reviews than you have, so I will give you a 5/5 to make up for what you lack in comments.