The Terror of My Life

• Artist: TheGaurdian of the Zodiac
• Description: I might have real emotion in here but idk its hard to explain. hope u like
• Date: 06/30/2011
• Tags: terror life

My life ends in the rant of others
My life ends with people hating each other
As my life ends I wonder why people detest one another
As I fall people put me in the middle

I fall in the middle of chaos
The Terror of My Life stares me in the eyes
As I fall it laughs as it makes one hate the other
It smiles at my destruction and sadness

I fight it off with the tought of me destroying myself
As it leaves people turn to me for answers
But I have none so they hate me as well as eachother
The Terror of My Life comes back and laughs at me even more

As it laughs I stand against it and fall down to my demise
The people around look and kick and my lifeless body
I return and stand once more against The Terror
It backs down and the people around me return to one loving the other

Comments

[Anyuiitte]

It is very intriguing. I find it interesting that you would capitalize The Terror. This seems to suggest that it an entity of great relevance in your life. Is it symbolic of divorce or perhaps something darker like domestic violence? The beauty of poetry is its vague nature. It can be expression without form, or form without substance. It allows for both expression and censure. Overall I like your poem for its ambiguous nature. On an unrelated note, you misspelled thought in the third quatrain.

[TheGaurdian of the Zodiac]

Thanks yuchi

[Chi Moon Light]

its very interesting i like it alot