Begin My Own Life

• Artist: Cydarta
• Description: by Adiatma Sidarta. Don't copy and share without any permission.
• Date: 11/02/2011
• Tags: begin life

Let me flow...
Let me go with the drops of rain today
Let me free...
Let me see the amazing world I'm living in
Let me sing...
Let think why do I just always stay
Let me fly...
Let me try to decide the way I want

You'll become the one who always saved in my heart
But now is the time I have to begin my life
Thanks a lot for growing me up and teaching me from the start
And now I go to begin my own life

Comments

[Unholy Spawn Zylus]

i liked your poem alot could you comment on mine i need some critisizm trying to become a better writer

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