The untold needs

• Artist: Crioh Rtear
• Description: I was in a relationship and the main reason that we split was because she was in her " finals time" and she never talked to me even though I tried at least once a day to make sure she was fine, This poem I want to be a Mark against her for not listening or talking to her BF of all people when she needed to talk, and instead listening to another man and getting back with an Ex who constantly hurt her!
  
  Thanks to XSIlientsorrowSX
• Date: 05/12/2012
• Tags: relationships hiding lying

You said that you had no time
Finals were keeping you away from love
My patience would have been considered sublime
Now I know you needed time to think how to get rid of

I Reached my hand out for you day by day
You said I was pushing even though I only cared
You ignored or never had anything to say
It seems my feelings i still had for you was not shared

You sent me a letter calling it off
You said i did not even know
Even though we have never started a scoff
Maybe the reason was because you would not show

You hurt me by leaving me for a man of lesser quality
I believe this all ended because your uncontrolled frivolity

P.S. This was my last step to get over it all and i don't care for ratings i just wanted to write and let the people see my feelings, thank you.

Comments

[Cheymera-San]

That was greatly written, you wrote all of your feelings on the situation and no confusion whatsoever!