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Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2009 9:59 am

Everybody post all your wonderful poetry pieces and tell people what you think of theirs.

please tell me what you think of mine:

Who am I?
I look in the mirror
And i see a stranger
I see anger and sadness and pain
Where is the joy?
Where is the kindness?
All i see s a fake smile
And someone elses eyes
Blank and staring
Where there used to be a garden
there is only barren earth
dead and empty
Who is this person i see?
Is it really me?

Tell me what you think.

Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 2:25 pm

needs a bit of work but its nice. heres one of mine

I look out the window.
The rain comes down.
I feel happy.
Like its washing my soul
all around.If only my
friends would see this
nature.I only know that
it is true.Oh when will your
soul, get a bath too?

iMeesho

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Posted: Wed May 20, 2009 7:50 pm

A kid in my school passed committed suicide this mother’s day weekend. I didn’t really know him at all, but still. The official story is that he “accidentally strangled himself” . . . with a rope. This is for him.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

It’s on the announcements,
Monday morning,
All I can think is,
It was mother’s day weekend.

And when everyone is crying,
All I can do is,
Feel numb.

And when we write to the family,
All I can say is,
I’m sorry for your loss.

And in math class,
All I can feel is,
Mourning.

And in the morning,
It’s all I can do to get dressed.

And now,
All I can do is listen to the echoes of kid’s laughter in my head.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Rest in Peace, Neil T. <3

Posted: Tue Jun 23, 2009 8:00 am

All of your poems are pretty good. Hope you like mine!

Broken
The pain and thoughts wont go away
as i look upon that day
you told me i didnt matter anymore
that broke me to my core
the hateful words we shout out
only brings me more doubt
I loved you, but all you did was break my heart
It began from the start
you loured me in with your charms
I wasnt ready, I was disarmed.
You attacked with no care
it was all i could bare
Finally when you were done using me as a toy
you took with u my joy
you left without a care, and didnt even dare
to look back and say goodbye
just waved on and left me to die.

Love is..
Love is a feeling that has no meaning
it sneaks into your heart and sometimes tears it apart
but when im with you, my love is true
you never fail to surprise and you opened up my eyes
you teach me to love again, and forget what happend before
I want to say thank you for always being true
you never gave up on me
even when i couldnt see
thanks for showing me the light, when all i used to see was the dark
you are the sun in my sky, the stars in my night
you are my love, my passion and you have my heart
so please, please dont tear it apart.
***This is dedicated to my Jason, the best guy ever. i love you jason** heart

4ever_lost in_ ur eyes

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Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2009 6:46 pm

i likes all of em!!! 3nodding

...and heres mine

The Reason My Heart Beats

She asked me...

"Do you love me?
Honestly and true
In my time of need...
Can I depend on you?"

"In my darkest hour
When I'm in the deepest despair...
Can I count on you
To still be there?"

"When the vices of life
Attempt to tear me down
Can I rely on you?
Will you still be around?"

I could tell she wanted more than just a simple answer
I could see it in her eyes
But it was certain no matter what I said...
The answer would make her cry

I pull her closer to me
And I try my very best
I look at her and tell her...
"Put your ear to my chest"

"Listen closely to the rhythm
Listen carefully to every beat
Listen and you will hear...
A melody so sweet"

"It is the sound of my heart
That feeds the blood through my veins
And if you listen close enough
You can hear it calling your name"

"I promise that I will always be here
And this melody will always be this sweet
because you are the very reason...
My heart continues to beat"

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Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 8:18 pm

Dedicated to a dear friend I lost not in death but in heart...

~*~*~ A Broken Star~*~*~

When we first met I had noticed your smile,

Shining bright as the NorthernStar,

Each day looked forward to seeing you shine,

But I knew that it would not last forever,

One day I knew it would run out as stars many before you

I thought I would be ready when that day came...

But I was wrong, when it came fierce like a thunder storm

Unstoppable & swift like the grasp of death it was over...

Like a star your force finally ran out,

Are bond had finally been ended,

Even though each day we see one another,

That smile I tried so hard to protect had fallen from my grasp,

Floating in pieces forever in the dark void we call memories,

Isa Amarynthia

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Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 4:05 pm

Oh dear, I wish I could dub my poetry as "beautiful," like the poetry already posted here.
(I have more poetry and some short stories in the writing arena.)

War
Misery
Peace
Happiness
Hate
Love
Epedimic
Cure

So many words
so many problems
so much weight on his shoulders.

So
little
time
to solve them.

Oxymoron, oxymoron
bring us
a
pleasant
ox;
golden horns
hooves
and soft eyes.

Strength to carry the
weight of our unpleasant
words, carry them
into the fire
(a phoenix is born)

Bring upon us
pleasant words, dear
dear
dear
ox, our good friend.

Welcome to Gaia! ::

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