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 Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 1:40 am
This is a place to submit your poems or a link to it... vvvvvvv *Click*^^^^^^^ V Just post it below V
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 11:37 am
heh...i dont think anyone will liek it...
crimson wings
she drew the blade to her wrist,
and sliced it through with painful bliss.
As the blood flow down her arm,
her wings glew with crimson charm.
Sorrowful tears rolled down her cheak,
she felt so useless, and so weak.
So there she sat upon her grave,
far too late for one to save.
The broken angel breathed once more,
her heart ached, her body sore.
She forced a smile to her face,
as her sole left its place.
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 3:45 pm
xWalkingxDisasterx heh...i dont think anyone will liek it...
crimson wings
she drew the blade to her wrist,
and sliced it through with painful bliss.
As the blood flow down her arm,
her wings glew with crimson charm.
Sorrowful tears rolled down her cheak,
she felt so useless, and so weak.
So there she sat upon her grave,
far too late for one to save.
The broken angel breathed once more,
her heart ached, her body sore.
She forced a smile to her face,
as her sole left its place. not bad not bad its quite refreshing...^o^
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 5:45 pm
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Posted: Sat Apr 15, 2006 9:07 pm
I have one that won an award if I can get it back form my damn school grrr..... it's weird it only took me like 5 min. to make.
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Posted: Tue Apr 25, 2006 2:50 pm
a_strange_roomA strange room, a cozy yet odd room. Small, square, and on fire. Burning wooden shelves, their contents blackening to a crisp. Little glass bottles burst in the heat. Liquids sizzle upon contact with the flames. Fire snakes up the walls in the corners. It blooms across the ceiling. A plush velvet chair sits near the window. Miniature fingers of flame dance on the upholstery. I think I'll sit in that velvet chair and read for a while. Until the flames consume me. 07-12-04 http://blather.newdream.net/a/a_strange_room.html
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 7:27 pm
Look what happens when I get bored...
"Loneliness"
Loneliness
A hollow echo in my breast
Loneliness
A black monster that never rests
I look into the darkness
Searching for your sweet embrace
Seeking the warmth my soul craves
Never satisfied without your taste
Fear of myself
Terrified as I alone walk this shadowed trail
Hoping that the end brings you
Hoping that I’m not to fail
When am I supposed to run?
Where am I supposed to hide?
When every tainted thought I feel
Tears me up and apart inside
Loneliness
A black hole that eats you alive
Loneliness
Keeps you wondering how long you’ll survive
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Posted: Mon Aug 07, 2006 7:28 pm
eddievedder#1 I have one that won an award if I can get it back form my damn school grrr..... it's weird it only took me like 5 min. to make. I have one that's gonna be published. ^.^
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:11 pm
Play me a Memory
They serve as teachers
Giving you lessons
Filling your head
With constant obsessions
Making you happy
With good thoughts and all
With the sadness that follows
The pain of your downfall
The new things you learn
Serve as reminders
But leaving you open
Like a book to the finders
So play me a memory
We’ll keep it as friends
Let it be what binds us
Through all the twists and bends. This is actually something i wrote after recalling a time of playing around with one of my friends. so ya, kinda dedicating this one off to one of the first few friends i made after moving to this town 10 years ago ^^
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Posted: Thu Aug 17, 2006 10:15 am
this is a nice idea, but i will start my own poem thread anyway, thanx
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 3:54 pm
I keep my poems over at Fiction Press, you can check them out here: http://fictionpress.com/~mrgrimm
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Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 9:34 pm
Quote: A strange room, a cozy yet odd room. Small, square, and on fire. Burning wooden shelves, their contents blackening to a crisp. Little glass bottles burst in the heat. Liquids sizzle upon contact with the flames. Fire snakes up the walls in the corners. It blooms across the ceiling. A plush velvet chair sits near the window. Miniature fingers of flame dance on the upholstery. I think I'll sit in that velvet chair and read for a while. Until the flames consume me. Don't know why, but that one made me laugh hehe. Heres one of mine anywho, its also in my Journal! "The Man in White and Red" ______________________ What was that gentle soul, Dressed in White and Red. Perched upon grassy gnoll, Surely that soul will be dead. Found quite alive and well, the man in white with misty eyes, Ponders of an inner hell. Fine is the dream in those eyes, Of a past free of misery. Waiting for the dawn, He marches like all soldiers past, What is past is gone, And his future short to last. Final steps upon that Hill, Not a marked man would envy him, Martyrdom his lives end, And soon his world's . But a dream! A hope! His sight clear from the haze, Takes aim, shots rope. Saved is life, let endure yet again, The anger, joy, pride, The reality and pain. Solace is found in this word, The man in White and Red, Purified of his discord. The man in White and Red, Eyes blue as a bold steel, Sets down the hill. Words ring out across the valley; "Live life, be happy! Feel!"
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 10:32 am
Despair
Waiting…
For that feeling
Its not quite here yet
But I know it’s on its way
…There it is
In the pit of my stomach
That feeling you can’t quite place
Though you know what it is
You’ve felt it many times before
In the dark…
Alone…
Where your darkest thoughts rampage your mind
Fear
Yet with a different component
More like the sense of giving up,
With no intent of going on
Letting go of life
Though you know if given another chance
You can do better,
Be a better person,
Iron out your faults
And you convince yourself that if you can just get past this,
All of these things will happen
But that feeling doesn’t give a s**t about what you want
It weighs down upon you
Telling you that you are worthless
That you should die
Crawl into the deepest parts of depression,
And drown yourself in the sea of despair
And it gets into your head
Until this becomes the natural way of thinking
Depressed,
Totally run down
You don’t want to see anyone,
Do the things you once loved
You are focused on those dark thoughts,
Utterly convinced that they are right
You cling to them as if your life depends on them,
Until they are all you can think of
They become your life
Forget of when you once thought to let them go
For to do so would mean loosing yourself
It becomes your cocoon,
A shield from the world
So that no one else can harm you
You are trapped
No one can get through to you
But that one voice
The one you are now convinced you should have listened to all along
And that is all you can hear
While you drown
“You are worthless”
While you flounder
“You’re not welcome in this family”
While you struggle
“ I wish you didn’t exist!”
And die
“Fat”
Being consumed
“Ugly”
Until you are entirely swallowed by this feeling
“Whore”
Never to return to whom you were
“FREAK!”
A now lifeless shell
Devoid of any emotion
The way back overgrown with hate and despising for yourself
A creation,
One of many
A product,
Of despair
©2005-2006 ~DeathOfTheChosen
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 6:54 pm
Foolish heart
I love you,
how can I not?
there is not a second of my time wasted on thinking about you,
you are the only one I think about,
you are the only one I care about.
All I hope for is for you to return my feelings,
but who am I trying to kid?
you will never look my way,
much less return my love,
my heart and brain say yes,
but deep down I can hear them say no,
it hurts,
but it’s the truth,
you don’t even know I exist,
I’m just another person around you,
no one special.
I shouldn’t play these games with my mind anymore,
it just brings more pain,
everyday I have to wake up to the truth,
yet I ignore it,
and I keep loving you.
I can’t help it,
you are my everything,
and I can’t live without you.
so please,
let these game go on,
let me believe you love me back,
I know you don’t,
but I don’t care,
I can take the pain for you,
because I love you,
and I’ll never stop.
I’ll go on loving you,
with this foolish heart of mine.
i know, it sux ^^ that's why i love it!
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:02 pm
Alrite here is one of my poems....
Alone
Don’t act like you aren’t their
Because I know you are
Don’t leave me all alone
To mend my own scars
Don’t pretend you don’t see me
Because I know you do
You just don’t want to talk to me
You really don’t have a clue
I know the games you’re playing
And why you play them too
You obviously don’t love me
They way you used to
Perhaps I’m being silly
Or a little paranoid
But I know you can’t come up
With an excuse that’s void.
So go ahead just leave me
I don’t need you anyway
I’ll manage by myself
So just leave, go away
Now you know how it feels
To be left out in the cold
With no-one to help or guide you
Left on your own to grow old
No I don’t feel pity
You didn’t pity me
So I guess I’m just as bad
As what you used to be
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