You guys should judge my writing.

[Hikari Li]

I made a very story/description of my avatar and I want you to read it, if you're not too busy, and give me some feedback. It's in my profile too.




Story/description for my avatar:
You stared in disbelief at the girl you knew for all your life.
"How?" You managed to stutter out.
If possible, her feral grin grew wider. It resembled the sinister smile of a psychopath. Her skin suddenly started to fade into the black of a starless night. But one long narrow obsidian eye, surrounded by the purple fire of the darkest soul, stared out at you, no trace of the companionship left in it.
"Because it was meant to be..." A soft voice said, coming from the wind. Your eyes darted around, trying to find the source of the familiar voice.
Your eyes landed on the familiar figure draped in the dark blue coat, a pair of leathery wings and velvety tail flapping and swishing with the wind. The moonlight glinted off the silver and gold armor your former friend was wearing, and the dark halo above her head moved nervously as if it were showing the distress of being closely examined.
A flash of silver and the katana in her hand swung.
The small voice returned. "I'm so going to win that costume contest."
You stared at the girl deadpanned. "You actually scared me for a minute there."
She grinned. "Sweet."  

[Zphal]

lol Very clever, I like it! whee  

[PizzaBoy220]

AHHH!! HELP!!! SHE"S GONNA EAT ME!!!

burning_eyes  

[Hikari Li]

xD Thanks.

Yup. Yup. Pizza is one of my many favorite foods. ;]  

[Hiro Cascade]

That was awesome.  

[Hikari Li]

Thank you.
The Candy Corn spirit of Halloween helped me write it.
[Translation: I was hyped up on Candy corn.]  

[Dr. Awkward]

I found that just a little too ridiculously good. Go back to your desk and write like a PROPER (I.E. illiterate) Gaian, THIS INSTANT! Just kidding. Seriously, though, that was really good.  

[Hikari Li]

xDDD

Thank you very much! :]  

[Dr. Awkward]

Hikari Li

xDDD

Thank you very much! :]

You're about fifteen, aren't you? Shouldn't you be functionally illiterate? Actually, it's wonderful to see a young person writing so well. The school system seems to be forsaking so many young people and throwing them into an abyss of illiteracy nowadays. And yes, I am praising you kinda relentlessly, but still.  

[Hikari Li]

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

xDDD

Thank you very much! :]

You're about fifteen, aren't you? Shouldn't you be functionally illiterate? Actually, it's wonderful to see a young person writing so well. The school system seems to be forsaking so many young people and throwing them into an abyss of illiteracy nowadays. And yes, I am praising you kinda relentlessly, but still.

Yeah. Exactly fifteen. Most All of my friends, except one, are illiterate, and it bugs me sometimes. Thank you. :]  

[Dr. Awkward]

Hikari Li

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

xDDD

Thank you very much! :]

You're about fifteen, aren't you? Shouldn't you be functionally illiterate? Actually, it's wonderful to see a young person writing so well. The school system seems to be forsaking so many young people and throwing them into an abyss of illiteracy nowadays. And yes, I am praising you kinda relentlessly, but still.

Yeah. Exactly fifteen. Most All of my friends, except one, are illiterate, and it bugs me sometimes. Thank you. :]

I've seen some young people use SMILIES with prose. Honestly, SMILIES! I am SO glad you're not like that...  

[Hikari Li]

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

xDDD

Thank you very much! :]

You're about fifteen, aren't you? Shouldn't you be functionally illiterate? Actually, it's wonderful to see a young person writing so well. The school system seems to be forsaking so many young people and throwing them into an abyss of illiteracy nowadays. And yes, I am praising you kinda relentlessly, but still.

Yeah. Exactly fifteen. Most All of my friends, except one, are illiterate, and it bugs me sometimes. Thank you. :]

I've seen some young people use SMILIES with prose. Honestly, SMILIES! I am SO glad you're not like that...

I don't use the smilies much. I like making my own text-ones and seeing if people can decipher them.  

[Dr. Awkward]

Hikari Li

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

xDDD

Thank you very much! :]

You're about fifteen, aren't you? Shouldn't you be functionally illiterate? Actually, it's wonderful to see a young person writing so well. The school system seems to be forsaking so many young people and throwing them into an abyss of illiteracy nowadays. And yes, I am praising you kinda relentlessly, but still.

Yeah. Exactly fifteen. Most All of my friends, except one, are illiterate, and it bugs me sometimes. Thank you. :]

I've seen some young people use SMILIES with prose. Honestly, SMILIES! I am SO glad you're not like that...

I don't use the smilies much. I like making my own text-ones and seeing if people can decipher them.

Text smilies give me a terrible headache. When ever I see a punctuation mark, my brain always tries to find its syntactical value. When I find none, I get a headache. Similarly, when ever I see a Roman letter (or even a cyrillic letter, Hiragana/Katakana symbol, Hangul symbol, etc.) I try to mentally pronounce it. If it hasn't a pronunciation, I get a headache.  

[Hikari Li]

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

xDDD

Thank you very much! :]

You're about fifteen, aren't you? Shouldn't you be functionally illiterate? Actually, it's wonderful to see a young person writing so well. The school system seems to be forsaking so many young people and throwing them into an abyss of illiteracy nowadays. And yes, I am praising you kinda relentlessly, but still.

Yeah. Exactly fifteen. Most All of my friends, except one, are illiterate, and it bugs me sometimes. Thank you. :]

I've seen some young people use SMILIES with prose. Honestly, SMILIES! I am SO glad you're not like that...

I don't use the smilies much. I like making my own text-ones and seeing if people can decipher them.

Text smilies give me a terrible headache. When ever I see a punctuation mark, my brain always tries to find its syntactical value. When I find none, I get a headache. Similarly, when ever I see a Roman letter (or even a cyrillic letter, Hiragana/Katakana symbol, Hangul symbol, etc.) I try to mentally pronounce it. If it hasn't a pronunciation, I get a headache.

I'm sorry. I'll cut down on them.

Wow. This is really hard...  

[Dr. Awkward]

Hikari Li

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

katsuhaiabi

Hikari Li

Yeah. Exactly fifteen. Most All of my friends, except one, are illiterate, and it bugs me sometimes. Thank you. :]

I've seen some young people use SMILIES with prose. Honestly, SMILIES! I am SO glad you're not like that...

I don't use the smilies much. I like making my own text-ones and seeing if people can decipher them.

Text smilies give me a terrible headache. When ever I see a punctuation mark, my brain always tries to find its syntactical value. When I find none, I get a headache. Similarly, when ever I see a Roman letter (or even a cyrillic letter, Hiragana/Katakana symbol, Hangul symbol, etc.) I try to mentally pronounce it. If it hasn't a pronunciation, I get a headache.

I'm sorry. I'll cut down on them.

Wow. This is really hard...

Really? Thank you very much. I am very grateful.