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 Posted: Fri Mar 09, 2007 5:53 pm
My world is ending
Haven’t you heard?
The nukes are dropping
The cows are rotting
Herd by herd
My worlds shattered
Like a mirror on a wall
My worlds dying
Just like my old grandpa
And grandma too
My worlds ending
Because I’m without you
My worlds disappearing
Like a magic act
But this time it won’t be coming back
My world is broken
Just like our government system
My world is over
There’s no save point to start over
No back up disk to begin anew
My world is dying
Just like my heart is crying
For a loving hand
My world is done for
And there’s and helping hand
To keep me up when I fall
My world is ending
Like I’m about to fall
And plummet down to die
To bad I can’t fly
My world is dead
And the words
Game over
Aren’t just a pack of lies
My world is forgotten
Just like my memory
Because now I’m free
My world has ended
And I’m sorry if I offended
Or if I pretended
To be someone else but me
My world is nothing more
And nor am i
Cause when you left me
I literally died
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 12:34 am
I loved the last 4 lines!
you have a couple of spelling errors and such
eg.s this doesnt make sense
"My world is done for
And there’s and helping hand
To keep me up when I fall "
but other than that its really really good
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Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 8:23 am
Wow, that is really good! biggrin
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