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Character Name: Gabriel the Necromancer
Username: Smells-Like-A-Cookie
Nation of Origin: Ancient Corith
Allegiance: 'Rogue'
Occupation: Dark Lord, Sage, Necromancer
Age: 1000+ years
Personality: Sarcastic, seemingly cool headed, obsessive, deceitful
Preference: Women
Bio: Gabriel was a normal human in Ancient Corith, and a talented magician. He quickly surpassed his mentors at the royal academy with his skills and struck fear into the hearts of the ancient king. Because of this, he was tossed out of the land, but he was fine with that. He built himself a tower in present day Hannon, where he lived as a hermit, obsessed with the magical arts. One day, he saw a strange magical spell being cast nearby, and curious, he followed it to see a beautiful valkyrie taking a bath. Love struck, he stole her clothes, only to be chased and beaten by the valkyrie. He apologized and begged for forgiveness because he did it out of love, and she told him love between Valkyries and humans can not exist. The valkyrie, feeling bad, gave her helmet to him as a gift. Using the his magic, he watched her and discovered it Fraya was trying to use him to shame her while they were on a mission to kill the Dark Lord. Furious, he went and killed the Dark Lord himself, becoming the new Dark Lord and killed many of the other valkyries. Fraya called a retreat, but the valkyrie he loved stayed behind to stop him. As both a punishment and a mercy, he sealed the valkyrie's divine powers inside the helmet she gave him, and he sealed most of his own powers of the dark lord inside of her. Because of this, the valkyrie died and was forced to be reborn as a human over and over. The necromancer, himself, went back to live alone in his tower, unable to die. He created human-like lifeforms in the shape of women to be his companions, but they weren't enough to satisfy him. He continued to do his research, waiting for the valkyrie, reborn as a human, to finally come to him.
Likes: Magic, playing with fools, chaos, flowers, women, beautiful things
Dislikes: brutes, fools, thinks not going his way
Other: Because he is the dark lord, he can use ancient godlike magic without magical stones, but he likes to use them anyway. Every hundred years or so, he likes to go out and play with people and see how civilizations are progressing.
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