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WeissRitter Mayura ~Kamironin-Kaldazar~ *sniffs*... I smell epic-ness in the making... 4 Acts and 88 Chapters of a novel is epic whee ~ the outline is done but could still be adjusted ~ i don't know just when will this novel be finished since I'm still writing at Act 2 Chapter 14 xp ~ Click the egg...
It is... 88 Chapters is... *counts on fingers for the sake of my head hurting (too much math class)*... four times longer than my current finished write-through of a story... And yours is more thought-out than mine...
I have to get working on a third write-though of my war-fantasy....
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 5:25 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 5:31 pm
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~Kamironin-Kaldazar~ WeissRitter Mayura ~Kamironin-Kaldazar~ *sniffs*... I smell epic-ness in the making... 4 Acts and 88 Chapters of a novel is epic whee ~ the outline is done but could still be adjusted ~ i don't know just when will this novel be finished since I'm still writing at Act 2 Chapter 14 xp ~ Click the egg... It is... 88 Chapters is... *counts on fingers for the sake of my head hurting (too much math class)*... four times longer than my current finished write-through of a story... And yours is more thought-out than mine... I have to get working on a third write-though of my war-fantasy.... You know you want to...![User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.](https://graphics.gaiaonline.com/images/s.gif) i have to get my printer and paper supplies ready for this novel too xd ~
this is the second longest story that i have ever written ~
maybe you need an editor just like i did. i asked my mother to edit it for me since she is an English teacher at some Philippine Embassy school abroad and yep i have to email every novel to her - i just wonder how long it will take her to edit this one novel gonk ~
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 6:27 pm
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WeissRitter Mayura ~Kamironin-Kaldazar~ WeissRitter Mayura ~Kamironin-Kaldazar~ *sniffs*... I smell epic-ness in the making... 4 Acts and 88 Chapters of a novel is epic whee ~ the outline is done but could still be adjusted ~ i don't know just when will this novel be finished since I'm still writing at Act 2 Chapter 14 xp ~ Click the egg... It is... 88 Chapters is... *counts on fingers for the sake of my head hurting (too much math class)*... four times longer than my current finished write-through of a story... And yours is more thought-out than mine... I have to get working on a third write-though of my war-fantasy.... You know you want to...![User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show. User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.](https://graphics.gaiaonline.com/images/s.gif) i have to get my printer and paper supplies ready for this novel too xd ~ this is the second longest story that i have ever written ~ maybe you need an editor just like i did. i asked my mother to edit it for me since she is an English teacher at some Philippine Embassy school abroad and yep i have to email every novel to her - i just wonder how long it will take her to edit this one novel gonk ~ Click the egg... Second.... longest....? How fricken' long was the biggest one?!
Editor...? I doubt it. It's more a personal thing... I'm only satisfied if I can be proud of it. The past two write-throughs have made me go "Ehhh..." and look at parts closely to see if I can make them longer or whatever for next time. Such as the beginning to the second write-through and how little background there was to the who and the why and the how "x-nation" fell to "x-character" (names are not being used because I'm going to release very few details). I fixed that a bit with my first chapter-work-in-progress of a third write-through... I think it needs to be longer....
THERE I GO SECOND GUESSING MYSELF AGAIN, AHHHH!!! *head-desk*
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 7:02 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 8:02 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 8:07 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 8:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 8:50 pm
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~Kamironin-Kaldazar~ WeissRitter Mayura + finished checking her storyline + you're at the Act 1 of the novel Kami ~ SPOILER ! dramallama ~I am? surprised Can you PM me the character profile and whatever sketch you've pro'lly made? Please? ninja hrm ... ~
i haven't made any character prfiles aside from Mayura, Dusk Mayu and Okami ~
maybe i'll do them later when i got the time 3nodding ~
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 9:08 pm
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WeissRitter Mayura ~Kamironin-Kaldazar~ WeissRitter Mayura + finished checking her storyline + you're at the Act 1 of the novel Kami ~ SPOILER ! dramallama ~I am? surprised Can you PM me the character profile and whatever sketch you've pro'lly made? Please? ninja hrm ... ~ i haven't made any character prfiles aside from Mayura, Dusk Mayu and Okami ~ maybe i'll do them later when i got the time 3nodding ~ If you do end up with one, I would greatly appreciate seeing it. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 9:18 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 2:14 am
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Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 5:41 pm
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WeissRitter Mayura little_moon_girl Hey, Mayuri-pyon, am I included? Just curious. wink And I'd love to see Jay in it. I miss him! crying i originally planned a Lovestruck Tribute along the novel - it was ... on Act 3 ~ i was also thinking that you might not like the idea sweatdrop that i scrapped the Tribute idea ~ you are there - eversince Act 1 because you are schooled at Durem and you made several appearnces in the said Act (a significant character ? ) ~ UAGH ! THAT WAS A SPOILER ! gonk ~ Oh goody! Thanks, Mayura-pyon!
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Posted: Tue Jan 20, 2009 10:55 pm
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Posted: Wed Jan 21, 2009 9:06 am
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Ritter Mayura are the mod tools still working ? ~ if yes, i appreciate that this thread be moved so i can easily find it gonk ~ EDIT: To the new members who have seen this, i cannot add yourselves anymore - this story has already been finished - check the date of my 1st post xd ~
Moved where?
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