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 Posted: Mon Jul 10, 2006 11:22 am
thats cool, luv it! i like writing lyrics too, but i can't write just lyrics, i need to hav music before the lyrics.
i wrote a song too! tell me what u think plz!(no chorus)
i'm pissed off
unsure
and wondering why you're still here.
i'm stressed out
uncool
and still wondering why you're here.
you need to get away from me
just leave me alone for a day
find a safe place away from me
where you know you can stay.
i'm dangerous right now
you really need to back down
i feel like i'm gonna explode
and i don't want you to see me.
i love you to much
i really do care
and i don't want to hurt you
or leave you in despair.
i get that you're trying to help
but it really doesn't work.
it's no use
we're washed up
i'm stuck in a fog.
i lost it
long gone
to far away.
i really love
but you don't need to stay.
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:45 pm
Great song.I really like it. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jul 30, 2006 9:52 pm
A little for cheerful in the lyrics than what I usually listen too. It's hard to judge how it would sound without the music. Some people could make that an awesome, eardrum bustingly-loud hard rock song and others would make it a soft rock song. Which way it works all depends on the vocalists singing style.
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:51 pm
It's good, but I'm trying to think of what tune to put it too.
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 8:22 pm
hmm.. the rythmes are kinda chunky and basic.. I like the concept but I still think you need better wording.
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 10:38 am
That is very good, I really liked the chorus part
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 6:31 am
love the song! can't wait for the tune, do you have the tune?
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Posted: Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:24 pm
I think they have a positive message. I like it.
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Posted: Sat Apr 05, 2008 12:59 pm
FORUM RESURECTION!!!!!! blaugh
I think it is okay but I would like to know the genre
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Posted: Mon Apr 07, 2008 9:31 am
OMG!~! You guys should ask the iBand to use your lyrics!
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 8:22 am
i like it it's happy....not like the stuff i write all very depressiv....good work, when the music is good too than it's alltogether a very good song...
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Posted: Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:39 pm
I like it alot, good lyrics. :] But like a lot of other people, I'd like to hear it sung.
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Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 2:44 pm
did you copy parts from another song? this is very familiar sounding....*sniffs the air* do i smell copyright? =X
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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 7:18 pm
Wayne's World, Wayne's World! Party Time! EXCELLENT!!! WOO-OOO
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Posted: Fri May 23, 2008 1:52 pm
*CLAPS*
that's a GREAT song!
*waits to hear more*
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