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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:14 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:20 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:25 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:29 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:32 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:37 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:37 pm
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Trust me, if I REALLY tried, it I put my soul, and every keystroke into my writing, i would tie with Pummel. I'm just not that dedicated. In fact, I'll demonstrate. I'll revise the description I gave of Richter.
A rather slender tamer, with a stern face and seemingly crossed arms, stood out in the distant disaster that plagued this land, causing immoral chaos and agony, tearing out all hope of survival to those who lived there. It was madness. And yet, this tamer stood, motionless, in the middle of this insanity. His long, black hair swaying evenly in the wind, as if it was being combed. Each individual strand danced in it's own fashion, like silk threads being woven into a beautiful garment. But, in its own sense, these strands were more....refined than a silk thread, more graceful and elegant as they performed their dance in the wind.
I can do much better, but that same post would've taken at LEAST five times as long.
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:39 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:42 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:42 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:43 pm
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Posted: Wed May 06, 2009 7:48 pm
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 1:36 pm
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 2:06 pm
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 3:02 pm
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