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 Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 7:43 pm
I want to be a person who writes songs so read and tell me, Is my dream a reality or should i keep my day job as an artist?
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Posted: Wed Dec 05, 2007 7:44 pm
Tired.
What more do you want from me?
What more do I need from you?
Can't you get it strait?
What I'm trying to say is
that we're through.
I'm done with all the petty threats
that you think
will keep me here-
I'm done with all the little games
you keep on playing
behind my back-
I'm so sick of everything that you can't get right
and more importantly
I'm just tired of you.
I'm tired of every little mistake
I'm tired of every chance that we need to take
I'm so tired and sick of coming back knowing that we're through
But so much more importantly
I'm tired of you.
I'm giving up with making up.
I'm done with saying goodbye.
I'm through with coming back
so I'm willing to give someone else a try.
Good luck with where you're going cause i know now
that I'm not going with you
Because We are through.
I'm tired of every little Lie
that you ever fed me
I'm done taking orders from you
I'm done making mistakes like ending up with you
I don't want to think about tomorrow.
just shut your mouth cause this is what I'll do
I though with you
Shut up! This has gone on long enough
I'm done with everything.
Back off, I'm quitting this mess that you have done to me
I'm making amends
I'm moving again
I'm getting out
I'm getting away
I'm going on my way
I'm done with it!
I'm so tired
So tired
So tired
So tired
Shut up, this has gone on long enough
I'm tired of every little mistake
I'm tired of every chance that we need to take
I'm so tired and sick of coming back knowing that we're through
But so much more importantly
I'm tired of you.
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Posted: Thu Dec 06, 2007 3:58 pm
 I believe the word your looking for is Lyricist. Anyway, I thought it was pretty good, and I'd love to hear it to music sometime.
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:56 pm
It is really good, although it reminds me a song done by likin park
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 7:04 pm
It depends on what type of music you're aiming for. If you're going for a more rap-core sound (the reference to linkin park had it right), then these are pretty solid. I will never, EVER say to give up, though. You have something here, and if it's not quite where you'd like it to be, just keep tweaking it and refining it. There is a difference, though, in lyrics and music. I've got lyrics out the wazoo and can't get the music to save my life.
If you want to writemusic, study music theory and chord structures and counterpoint, then go from there. And do your best to really really become familiar with the instrument you're writing on. If you want to write lyrics, decide what kind of style you're writing for and go from there. Team up with someone who writes music.
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 7:22 pm
Wicked.
I was reading through the song and was kinda singing it in my head and I went to music. Again, wicked. It sounded pop-ish.....along the lines of Avril Lavinge. Keep it up!^^
Also.....some parts reminded me of linkin park, and some of simple plan.
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Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 11:03 am
I think it's a great song =D
I'd love to hear it to music someday
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Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 11:43 am
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Posted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 6:40 pm
That was great.
You sure do have talent so I would follow your dream and keep writeing.
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Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 7:41 pm
i say go for it! the song sounded great!
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