I write poetry, and I find it a great way to relax, but I want to know what people think about my work. Heres one of my poems.

Tittle: Sleep

A time where I can relax.
A time where I can fly.
A time where I can be
A time where I can see.......


A time where I can exist
the way I want to be...
A time To be accepted
By all of everything......


I can run
I can swim
I can Try
I can Cry.
I can Give
I can Live
I can Learn
I can BE......

and I can die......

I can relive moments in my past
and I can make decisions that will probably last.....

It's the time where I can be who I am without fear
It's the time I can Listen, and almost start to hear.

To bad I can't stay like this all the time...
But life would incomplete... like a lemon without a lime.

Dreams are sometimes nice...
But reality is sometimes too.

But for now its time to wake up.
Now what is there to do?

Sit here and complain?
Or fix a problem or two.