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Posted: Fri May 16, 2008 1:23 pm
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I just wrote this one day when i was mad. my ex told me that it was good but i want other people's opinions. the poem is called " Slowly Die "
As I slowly die , you continue to drag me down . I try to mak a life for myself ,yet you always take that away from me . The people I want to be with , you take me away from them . Other people who care ,you never acknowledge them .
The silence between them and me ,it slowly kills me inside . On the out side I smile ,and inside I cry . I try to explain things to you ,but you never understand . Why must you slowly kill me ?When everyone else trys to keep me alive ?
Why must I slowly die and live a lie ,when I could live in happiness . Why must you put me through all of this ? When i try to make it stop ? Must you kill me so sadly ?Must I be forced to see the things I do ? I want to break away .I want to live the way I chose . As I slowly die , others try to revive me . As I'm fading away , my tears continue to fall . Keep me here , keep me alive . Never let me die . Nothing will be the same . Everything will change . As I slowly die , things already evolve .
I want to be here . I want to see others . But right now , you confine me to loneliness . These halls of torture , these halls of pain , continue to slowly kill me as I slowly die . I won't be accepted into Heaven , and I will be rejected from Hell . I will forever be forced to live here . Forever while I slowly die . All of these walls that hold me inside got no love for me . Nothing shows me love , nothing shows me any care .
Why must I slowly die and live a lie ,when I could live in happiness . Why must you put me through all of this ? When i try to make it stop ? Must you kill me so sadly ?Must I be forced to see the things I do ? I want to break away .I want to live the way I chose . As I slowly die , others try to revive me . As I'm fading away , my tears continue to fall . Keep me here , keep me alive . Never let me die . Nothing will be the same . Everything will change . As I slowly die , things already evolve
I want to be kept alive . But you won't stop killing me inside . I try to relieve myself of the pain , yet you bring it back again . Why won't you leave me alone ?Why won't you ******** leave ? Get out of my head , get out of my life !
Why must I slowly die and live a lie ,when I could live in happiness . Why must you put me through all of this ? When i try to make it stop ? Must you kill me so sadly ? Must I be forced to see the things I do ? I want to break away .I want to live the way I chose . As I slowly die , others try to revive me . As I'm fading away , my tears continue to fall . Keep me here , keep me alive . Never let me die . Nothing will be the same . Everything will change . As I slowly die , things already evolve
I won't stand to be killed the way I am . I want control of my own life . I don't want you telling me how to live . You keep me confined to these places . Now I shall break free and live a life of my own .
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Posted: Mon May 19, 2008 4:47 pm
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Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 5:53 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 6:30 am
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Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 12:45 pm
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Posted: Wed Oct 01, 2008 10:24 am
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