Urgent help needed!! Please??

[SniperWolf16]

Okay..I wanna know what I really need to do to fix this..I'm not happy with it and I just can't put my finger on what's wrong. gonk crying
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Ummmm...
I also wanted to know if I should add the guitar or not because I know I can pull it off but I can't decide. Here it is:


And here's the picture I went off of:


So if you can..please help crying  

[Cornelius loh Quatious]

Facial structure, man, gotta know it. The way you've got it drawn, his nose (and his upper jaw) extend far in front of the rest of his face, and is quite narrow as well. The front of the human skull is actually pretty flat in the vertical dimension. The left eye should be smaller than the right, because it's farther back, but from what I can see of the right eye, this is not the case.

Also, don't cover up so much of your drawing with hair. Hair doesn't usually behave like that anyway.  

[oO2bored2careOo]

you need cheek bones and the nose is waaaaayy to big 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding  

[oO2bored2careOo]

wait.... what the hell?!?! why didnt you give the guy pupils?? he looks like a corpse!!! blaugh rofl blaugh rofl blaugh rofl .......... blaugh  

[iSaichi]

yeah take off some of the hair from his face so you can add his mouth, and fix his eyes lady_oddesy makes a good point ._.