Ryoumon's Poems

[Fires Blaze]

No I don't have a myspace page. I'm not one who likes myspace.  

[Ryoumon]

Fires_Blaze

No I don't have a myspace page. I'm not one who likes myspace.

I used to be on myspace all the time. Now I only use it for blogs. Yukio is a major myspace fan, he's ALWAYS on it.  

[Captain Yukio]

SOOO...it's only because I love codes and making backgrounds...  

[Ryoumon]

Captain Yukio

SOOO...it's only because I love codes and making backgrounds...

You love it a little too much. Check out my new Weregarurumon!!!  

[Dystopia Lycanthropia]

I like them a lot... especially Dragon's Heart. The only suggestion I have (if you don't mind suggestions from a fellow poet) is that you try to make it flow more smoothly... The number of syllables per line and the rhythm of each line is kind of erratic right now, which makes it flow a little roughly when you read it.

(Trust me, I struggle with that all the time)  

[Storm Waltz]

I love the line "...trace their World with chalk" heart  

[Ryoumon]

Storm Waltz

I love the line "...trace their World with chalk" heart

Thanks for the compliment. I used that line because I always draw doorways to other worlds in chalk. Sadly, none of them have opened.  

[Mint-Mae]

ooh! i love "Eternal sleep" that' exaclt yhow i feel right now!  

[sieg777]

these poems are nice and reflect the time you spent in reflecting on them. the poems all have their own unique ideas behind them. to me, the poems seem to lack variety in what has been shown here. i'd love to see poems from you with a different rhyme sheme, structure, or mood. they have that basic last word rhyme style AA, BB or -A-A,-B-B, and a somber or depressed mood to them. show me poems with variety.