My newest drawing

[Bloody_Angel92]

 

[tricky_angel]

It's a good start with what seems to be an interesting story behind the scenery?

Thought this might help on your anatomy work a bit, remember that shoulders are half to a head apart and the breasts come up:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v178/icebringer/redline.jpg  

[Prof. Moonie]

It's pretty good, but there's plenty of room for improvement. As tricky_angel said you need to work abit on your anatomy. Something she didn't mention was the face. I felt that her nose was pretty far down from where her eyes would be. Usually when drawing noses likes that the top starts at the same height as the top of the eyes themselves. The distance you have between the nose and the mouth seem alright. There are few other things that you might want to tweak, but those are just some of the major ones I noticed. 3nodding  

[Redeemed Ashes]

Okay, biggest problem here are the shoulders, much too wide with hips much too narrow. Hips should be atleast as wide at the shoulders for a woman. the typical woman's body goes out-in-out (like and hourglass). The typical male's body has wide shoulders, narrow hips; out-in (like an uspide down triangle). Keep Working!