Heres a poem that I wrote during study hall second semester. I don't have a title, but if you think of one please tell me.
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Join the club
You thought you were in love
But from the very start
He planned to break your heart
You thought that it would last
But then it ended fast
Cause he was just a jerk
That’s why it didn’t work
He was perfect wasn’t he?
It’s time to face the truth honey
He really was no good
You’ve cried way more than you should
He was nothing but a fake
I know it’s hard for you to take
But now it’s time for you to move on
Cause if you don’t then he’ll have won
I’ll always be right here
So don’t even shed a tear
But even if you do
I’ll be standing right by you
We’ve been friends since the very start
And friends can mend a broken heart
The pain you feel will never last
So get out there and have a blast
You deserve so much more
So pick your heart up off the floor
Cause I’ll be standing next to you
With some chocolate and some glue
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Please tell me what you think.
I also have it posted in the writting arena, so it would be really nice if you could vote for it there. The link its below.
http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/poetry-and-lyrics/vote/?entry_id=100016569
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