I've been trying to come up with some different stories, but it's been hard. Care to help? If I was to win in the arena, I'd share my glory with the winning story author!
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:45 pm
I'd give it a 5 but maybe without the birds.... as for a story.....
A masqure party is always a delight, and I am told that Mr. (Insert Name) has the best in town. They are always so beautiful and his mask is always the best, but they warn that there is something wrong with Mr. (Insert Name). The crowd whispers that he isn't all human. Part beast. One should never stare at Mr. (Insert Name)'s deformity. Anyone who stares for too long is said to end up in the pasture by the next morning, eating the grass as if they were one of their own horses!
Let me know what ya think... I'll try and think of something better...
It's an interesting combination of items. But I'm concerned that some people might think you just put on a bunch of stuff with no real theme going on. The "cluttered" look as some may call it.