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Jessybelldove

PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:02 pm
-Just wanted to show you the comic. Its backgrounds are drawn by me and the edits are done by me. Avi sprites and items sprites belong to gaia.-

(This is an official piece of mine =D) Not...
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If any spaces are available then please try to take a part because I would gladly accept some. cool  
PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:05 pm
The comic!

Comic 1 Intro-
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Comic 2 Bad guy intro-
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Comic 3 Intro to new character Aces-
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Comic 4 Training school-
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Comic 5 intro of Venus-
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Comic 6 two storys fit into one.-
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Comic 7 The 2 samari fight.-
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Comic 8 Jack the pumpkin king.-
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Comic 9 The information in the capturee's place is out.-
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Comic 10 Aces finds out about his brother.. Aces will go to help friend.
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Comic 11 The conclusion of what happens to venus..
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Comic 12 Chaos happens regular with its ups and downs...
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Comic 13 Sari knows... Aces memory..
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~Note this comic has blood in it, I have warned you and prepare to cry wink ~

Comic 14 Aces finds out more about Jacks....
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~Note this comic has blood in it.~

Comic 15 Intro of Haruko the spy.
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Comic 16 Haruko knows Aces friend Yuma's name now razz
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Comic 17 Sari and Princess Monoko speak. Here comes the new student.
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Comic 18 Jacks and Sari's student fight. Aces escapes.
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Comic 19 Jacks and Sari's student fight continue. More drama too.
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Comic ~20!~ Haruko knows Aces now... Hoorah! More Drama!
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Comic 21 Sari's student runs away from Jack.
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This comic has blood in it. You have been warned.

Comic 22 The fight between Princess Monoko and Venus.
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Comic 23 Aces get Mononoko to safety but Haruko comes..
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Comic 24 Princess Monoko's Capturer. The plan.
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Comic 25 Sari student and Jacks troop....
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Comic 26 The story line deepens like a cut.
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Comic 27 The deadly world of life.
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Jessybelldove


Jessybelldove

PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:07 pm
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Well obviously the comic is going to be confusing if you read it full on.
So let me start you off with the current characters-

Sari- She is the trainer of the oakwallnots samarai training place.
She is skilled with her sword, she knows all about being a samarai and has trained other samarai trainers to learn how to train students.
She has turned down a samarai in the past and is now fighting her off to keep the other samarai's the bad samarai envys from being hurt or even killed. She is a helper of the police and law. She is allowed to arrest people.


Princess monoko- She is also a samarai trainer giving newbies a taste of the sword. She doesnt use a sword to fight, but her loyal power stick (made from the gem of truth which has been stolen from Venus) to defeat bad people who attack. Its more trust worthy then a samarai sword because she wont acciedently cut herself and if she can combine her power with it she can still break things in half with it. She now knows Aces love for her.

Aces- Jackes hour younger twin. This may seem like a bad birth but its actually the birth of truth that Jacks actually envyed. He had more attention from his parents despite the fact he had an older brother and lived on the streets. His parents had to send him to a samarai school though which was a bit like boarding school, when Jacks left. He never has seen his parents again, in fact he didnt know why his parents sent him, but it was the same time Jacks became evil and left to do bad. He never seen him since but he doesnt act like a good samarai though he still thinks of the time he has been with Jacks and acts like the street fighter he was in the old days. He decided to stay good unlike his brother and fell in love with his trainer Princess monoko. Unfortunatly he regrets becoming good because his brother Jacks is a high classed criminal and the only thing good he should do is turn him in, yet because its his brother he doesnt want to. When he left the samarai school one of the other students there who befriended him in the place joined him on his adventures. Now there is more mischief awaiting, he now knows his parents are dead..

Yuma- Aces partner in the comic, she decided to tag along and just chill with him, when she was with him she decided to get something to help him with his quest, unfortunatly someone bad has it also some rival of the bad person is after it. She is loyal to Aces and tries not to upset him either.
She falls in love with Haruko in it too.


Bad guy (red hair)- She has been training herself as a samarai when she was younger facing death, dishonesty, fear and love. She was turned down by the samarai training place when she wanted to try the higher trainer to see if she can become more highly trained. She was said to be too evil so she is up for revenge. She has works for Jacks now.

Bad guy (blue hair)- Her life is unknown, all people know of her is that she works for Jacks. She is very tough and described as the princess of evil...

Venus- After being born she became evil. Venus was brought up in an enviroment where she ruled. She was a very clever and wise person but still evil, this got her to become the boss of very strong troops but her assisstant is wulfy a human beast that doesnt talk and its pet robotic dog that is actually talking for Wulfy. Even though it may seem the thing has a life of its own its controlled by Wulfy. Her old trainer was Mr Samurai, so was Jacks. They killed him together to get the Gem and she got it.

Wulfy+robotic dog- Yes they have their own information. Wulfy was actually a dog or thought of as but as it grew human features became seeable. This was a shock to the people that took it in. It was more of a dog though funnily enough. The robotic dog was created by it with a memory chip like its brain so the boss could comunicate and know whats in Wulfy's brain still.

Jack The Pumpkin king- Jack is obviously Aces brother. He said himself in the comic, Aces profile explained him enough. He is controlling strong samarai's so far that turned evil. He uses pumpkins to detroy whatever or whoever gets in his way. He is Venuses Rival and enemies with the samarai clan of good. He still loves his brother though. He is figuring a way to get him on his side. He tells Aces about the death of their parents but obviously someone decided to come along to destract him making Aces escape.

Sari Student- She is Sari's top student. She went after Jacks to fight him. She is very bubbly and niave but still slick and sly wink The rest is unknown.

Haruko-Haruko is a ninja assasin who works for a very evil man. His Job is to assasinate. He is the one who killed Aces parents. Funnily enough he was sent to get Princess Monoko but then Yuma spotted him and they fell in love. Aces comes back and Haruko recognises him! He killed his parents! Yuma is Aces friend too? What are the chances of that?!!

People who made the characters (on tektek) other then me who joined the comic:-

Jack the pumpkin king- My twin brother

Aces- My cousin (boy)

Venus- My cousin (girl and the other ones sister)

Haruko- Kyo cat san. A new character from the thread =3

The rest are my little puppets. xd  
PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:10 pm
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Jessybelldove


Jessybelldove

PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:13 pm
Rules :O

The rules-
This is MY comic!! My own ideas! Even though some of the characters were made by some of my reletives and my brother they have not put any part of making the comic. No ideas except for Aces who decided to have a brother called Jacks and his name being Daniel.
They all chose their powers too! What I am saying is, you cant say I stole ideas from the comic or steal them yourself. If I stole ideas you need to prove it because I am pretty sure I can turn it against when I tell you that I havent with my proof.
I make the backgrounds myself also so ha! I dont look for particular designs or anything else in that matter. You are also not aloud to have that design for that character unless its someone completely different altogether. It may be a design from tektek but it will be a bit suspicious if your making a character that looks exactly the same as one of mine.
This rule is about the concept of copyright theft alright biggrin

Obviously nessasary critism is okay but unfortunatly I look at some things a little differently from you, I only accept critism in what the characters act like and what I should of put instead of.
I do not accept critism from background designs of avis movements, I only have paint and I cant be BOTHERED to look up from some dumb backgrounds. Put that in your own comic. The drawings done like in the first little comic with the curtains can be critisised, things like that but background the character movements or what they look like cant be.
Sorry. This rule is about critism nessessary before I count it as flaming.

Please do not be mean to others who you find made a wrong point, I mean we are all a little human in some cases.
This means no flaming Them no remarks showing how more superior you are to them because we are all equal and no dissing the one who made the comics. I also dont want remarks about them not being on the fan list because of this and that. This is about no predujice remarks!!

(No power hogging! You are like any other user, you are not aloud to edit their posts unless it contains just one emotion or they say bump or em or er or whatever has nothing to do with the comic or the conversation going on or anything whatsoever!! Do not delete flaming or other things, I want to see who did it so I can ban them from the guild so others wont be hurt.
This rule is about Abusing power.)- This was for my guild XD So ignore most of it.

Complaints about the comic being offensive to you? What? This comic is in no particular country is not against any religion or faith, I dont even think there are any serious swear words enough to harm you! Its not even sexist! Contains no nudity or sexual scenes! In fact I think the only thing offensive about it is violence! If you do not like Violence then do not read it! This rule is about the concept of anything offensive in there.

Well thats all about it. razz
You may be aloud to get away with small things once otherwise your ignored.  
PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:15 pm
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If you want to be on the fans list then please tell me, in a pm, post it or anything. Give me your username and the picture of your avi. =D
This is because you might be chosen to be in the comic.  

Jessybelldove


Jessybelldove

PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:18 pm
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:21 pm
Little comics. The first 2 pics is The relic comic, ignore it. The others were just for fun.

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This one is a little warning message okay.
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This one is just good to put up =3
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This is blimming confusing.
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Jessybelldove


Jessybelldove

PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:25 pm
People Added and now in the hall of Fame.

Username-Kyo-Cat-San
Name in comic- Haruko
Which do you wish to be?- Mysterious ninja
Biography- As a small boy he had benn trained in the arts of asassination, living by the code, show no emotion. He is a ruthless killer, moving on from one victim to the next, Jack and Aces parents, the unlucky couple that had showed up on his list. The person who had hired him up to this said little but offered a great sum, and nonethless Haruko obliged. Now living on his own have given up the trade, he lived his life in the most normal fashion he could.
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Username- Jessybelldove
Name in comic-Tomoko
Which do you wish to be?- Sari's student
Biography- She is the top student of Sari. She always keeps to the book of righteous. She is a very bubbly and sweet character that its impossible to dispise her, even though she says some nasty things. She loves a good flirt or two. She uses her dagger mostly to attack. She has been trained to be like a ninja but she keeps to her own method most of the time XP.
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:29 pm
I am my own first poster! Enjoy all of you! xd  

Jessybelldove


Jessybelldove

PostPosted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 1:18 pm
My first ever Relic bumper.

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