POEM: Sorry. (opinions, please?)

[ice_lollies]

I'm sorry
for all my
mistakes,
mis-interpretations,
mis-conceptions.
You were right
to keep things
from me, at least
at that time.
I was confused, and
still am, but
more so
before, and
couldn't see.
I was blinded by
ignorance,
jealousy,
love.
Unrestricted,
uncontrollable,
all consuming...
love.
I need to make you
see that i've
changed, and i think
you see
now.
Thankyou.
I'm sorry for saying sorry
I apoligise for apoligising

Um, yeah. I hope you like this, please honestly tell me what you think! If you like it, then I'll post more of my other poems smile  

[Zphal]

I like it. The lines are short, so it strengthens your poem and the message it carries. Nice job!  

[Saikii]

It flows nicely. Nice job! ; )  

[ink.a.holic]

hmm. i don't think you need to say love a second time. you could just say, "unrestricted/uncontrollable/all consuming" and leave it a fragment, since you mentioned that it was love before. also, i don't really think you need the last three lines--they sort of break up the mood. but i think it's good, nice word flow smile