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EWWWWW! POETRY! |
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It's horri- ARRGGH! LET GO OF MY THROAT!!! |
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Pay me gold and we'll talk! (Poll Whore option) |
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Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2007 9:51 pm
Hello all. I am the Unsung Bard, mastermind behind a few RP's and talented poet. From now on, you have the PRIVELAGE of seeing some of my best, and worst, works. They will be posted weekly, and I hope to alternate between my good and not so good poems.
Starting with one of each, here is the first poem I ever wrote...
Words
So much depends upon A single word For like a seed It can grow From word to sentence From sentence to paragraph From paragraph to book The seed has become a tree Though some plant seeds That become bushes Which bear sweet berries Like the words in poem
A word can be like a bomb That blows a dam Thus a mighty river springs forth Like the sentences in song Yet the waters may turn rough Like the words in rhyme and riddle Twisting, turning through the rocks Throwing off those Who dare to brave its rapids
Yet even trees have roots In truth words are many letters Joined as one They are the makings of worlds The tributaries of rivers The same mighty rivers Flow out to sea And join others And where the seas meet It creates the world In which we read
Such are these words That come in many forms As gentle as the tallest oak As fierce as a sea at storm
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And one that's not so good... Earth
I sit here within the clouds And watch this planet from on high What I have seen saddens me greatly Tears fall like rain To grace the barren soil The air, once clean Is now laden with filth The water, once pure Is now streaked with chemical waste Dead fish, killed by pollution Litter the beach Majestic whales, who become coated in oil Struggle for life The wild life, once abundant Is now scattered and rare The people, clad in rags Litter the streets While the rich Spend their money on weapons Meant for each other All they’ve been given Is gone All they have been blessed with They have thrown away Slowly, their planet dies Slowly, life ebbs away Slowly Slowly ~
YAY FOR POETRY!
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 7:29 am
Gah! No response! My poetry is not good enough to recieve a review or two? You can at least tell me whether or not it sucked! wahmbulance dramallama
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 10:00 am
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 1:35 pm
To tell the truth, I didn't read the Earth poem, but I liked the Words poem. Words can be powerful.
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