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Alone- A Poem made by me
I hate this world now, so many deaths and sacrifices. Its not fair to those whose lost these people, but do others care about these people, who've lost their loved ones. They're dying inside, because of all this depression, anger. "Why won't this world just stop for a slight second, so I can rest for a bit?" This is my question I ask. People can be heartless not caring of others feelings. They ask how you are after a loved one's death, but all you want them to do is shut up and leave you alone. That is what I feel. They won't leave you alone and you get angry and take out your anger on them. You regret what you did to that person. You live with this regret unless you tell this person your sorry, truly and deeply. They might forgive you, they might not. Just beause you lashed out at that person, because they wouldn't leave you alone... you've lost a friend, a friend who was kind to you, who cared for you. And in the end you are truly.... alone.

-Katy
07/15/07
2:53 a.m.


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  • User Comments: [8]
    [Shiny Toy Gun]
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    Mon Jul 16, 2007 @ 08:42am


    You know it is sad, but it's also true. I've done that many-a-times to my boyfriend, but luckily he doesn't leave. =]

    Anyways, there's some grammar errors but it's pretty good. =]


    Lunar_firesoul
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    Tue Jul 17, 2007 @ 05:55am


    Deep with feeling of anguish, despair and the plight of humanity.
    Not bad, I take it as a somewhat jazzy feel. ^^
    Good poem.


    Amour morte
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    Tue Jul 17, 2007 @ 02:00pm


    wow eek


    JJJp
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    Tue Jul 17, 2007 @ 05:58pm


    it's really good and sadly true smile


    Kyoko081093
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    Thu Jul 19, 2007 @ 05:34am


    Thanks for the comments people


    TohruxYuki
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    Wed Aug 08, 2007 @ 05:21am


    Deep


    TohruxYuki
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    Thu Aug 09, 2007 @ 06:56am


    It's good. Free verse. I can't do free verse if my life depended on it. I will start to rhyme out of habit. xp


    dragonsaver
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    Wed Sep 26, 2007 @ 03:30am


    awesome poem because it's all so true i thought i was going to break down in tears and have to cry in a corner man it's just wow there's no other explainatiuon for it i also write poetry if you want me to send you a sample just ask i love to write poetry out of force of habit i just make it up on the spot while i'm talking to friends it's pretty funny spometimes hpow i can just think of one the way i do


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